Monday, 29 June 2009

If Only

Penned by Psych Babbler™ at 1:14 PM
If Only
I had my own house
I'd be fine

If Only
I had my own stuff
I'd have a big smile

If Only
I had more money
I'd be content

If Only
I had designer clothes
I'd feel confident

If Only
I had a snazzy car
I'd feel uplifted

If Only
I had a sleek laptop
I'd not worry a bit

If Only
I had more shoes
I'd be happier than before

If Only
I had gourmet food
I'd no longer feel sore

If Only
I had the new Wii
I'd be just like my mates

If Only
I had the XBox
I'd be one of the greats

If Only
I had a flatscreen TV
I'd feel fulfilled

If Only
I had the IPhone
I'd need nothing else

If Only
I'd known that having all I want
Would make me want much more

If Only
I'd known the answer to true bliss and happiness
Was not to have wanted all this before
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15 penned views:

  1. ohhh sooo true!...
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  2. I had a go at IF ONLY once upon a time :)
    but I must say this is commendable effort :)
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  3. @ Ersa: =) Yep, I notice most of us (me included --- except when it came to the XBox etc) set goals to achieve 'things' and then once achieved we just want more and more...when are we ever going to be satisfied with what we have?

    @ AD: Oh...I'll look it up if it's on your blog. My problem is that things have to rhyme and then sometimes, I think, I lose out on the meaning! =S
    Thanks for the comment =)
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  5. ahan contemplation, good good :)
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  6. Hi,

    How are you? Have great summer.Nice post.
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  7. The materialistic "if onlys" are positively unending. :) If only they really brought what we thought they'd bring.
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  8. Have a great weekend. cheers
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  9. if only i visit this blog often i understand whats real talent is !

    -bluffmaster
    http://gr8bluffmaster.blogspot.com/
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  10. Cool... If only.... :)
    infact i love that movie too...
    i read it while thinking about the movie
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  11. thats a lovely poem. specially the last para. :)
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  12. @ Ani: Welcome and thanks for commenting!

    @ Gigi: Thanks! :)

    @ Phoenix: Welcome...and yes, if only they did that! :)

    @ Priyan: Welcome and thanks for the lovely comment!!! :)

    @ Deepika: Welcome! I knew there was a movie but for the life of me can't remember who was in it or what it was about!! :)

    @ Scarletdiaries: Welcome and thanks for the lovely comment!! :)
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  13. this one was soooooooooooo good.. loved the way you managed the flow of thoughts and gave it such an inspirational end..

    one poem and I am a fan of yours.. :)

    p.s. following you now.. will be here for every new post..god bless!!

    Cheers
    Rane
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  14. @ Rane: Welcome and thanks heaps for the lovely comment! Now it puts more pressure on me to deliver next time in order to match your expectations! :)
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  15. It is so lovely... simple and yet elegant
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