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A life so full
And yet, so empty
People all around me
And yet, I feel lonely
I am confident
And yet, I crumble
I want to speak out
And yet, words stumble
I have so much
And yet, I’m unsatisfied
I long for change
And yet, I’m terrified
Until next time,
Cheers!!!
Seems like you are in the kind of mood I am in. Only you say it way better :-)
ReplyDeleteNice one.
Too good PB!! How do you articulate so well, I wonder!
ReplyDeletePS: Love your new header! :)
ReplyDeleteSheesh... I'll be a life-long fan of you! Simply admire the way you express yourself! And oooh, b.t.w, I love the new header image!!! :) Cheers..
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ReplyDeletedon't we all go through these stages at some point :)
ReplyDeleteOMSNL!!! I REALLY LOVE this poem!!! <3
ReplyDeleteVery well written...Touches a chord
ReplyDeleteThat's the crispest and most beautiful poem that I have read by you.
ReplyDeleteSo we're both in the same boat, huh TH? It's a bummer isn't it...? Thanks...
ReplyDeleteThanks Maddie! Honestly, don't know how I can articulate some of this...just feeling this way at the moment and tried to pen a few words...
ReplyDeleteThanks! :) I don't think it's as colourful as the previous one but thought it would be a change...
ReplyDeleteThanks Venice! :) Humbled by the praise...
ReplyDeleteTell me about it T! We all go through it some time or the other...doesn't make it any simpler though. Sucks!
ReplyDeleteThanks Greenorangesinger!
ReplyDeleteThanks Prats...I'm humbled at the fact that it manages to touch a chord especially as it's quite personal...
ReplyDeleteThanks Prajakta! The funny thing is it's also a poem that took the shortest amount of time to pen! Guess it's easy when you are totally feeling it!
ReplyDeleteLove the look of your blog :) Happy New Year...
ReplyDeleteIs something bothering you? You seem lonely in your poem...
Hey LP...Happy New Year to you too! Long time...
ReplyDeleteAh...lots of stuff bothering me at the mo...too many questions in my head...not completely lonely but feeling alone...hopefully, it's all a phase and this too shall pass!
So succinct and yet so powerful, PB. We all go through phases of discontent ...to me it's always a sign of having to make changes...
ReplyDeleteThanks Corinne! It's the confusion between staying with the way things are and wanting to change...so difficult!
DeleteI don't blog these days
ReplyDeleteAnd yet, I am here
I usually leave reading silently
And yet, I am commenting.
That's a good one Mahmud! Hope you are well...noticed you just wrote a post...after all these months!!
DeleteYeah PB, I am back hopefully :P
Deleteyour comment design is looking nice. I'm inspired to comment for the nice layout LOL