Sunday, 29 January 2012

Uncomfortable Feelings

Penned by Psych Babbler™ at 5:57 PM
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This feeling of dread
Tells me something is wrong
Or that something bad will happen
So that I’ll be unable to stay strong
And everything I’ve done
Will matter no long
All I can hope
Is that it means nothing
It is just an uncomfortable feeling
That within moments will be gone
So I can continue with life
And finally move on

***This has been written for One Single Impression Prompt 205***

Until next time,

Cheers!!!

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  1. Cheers!! I am sure the feeling went and all is wonderful and happy....

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    1. Thanks Ramesh...it takes time I suppose... :)

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  2. A feeling that rings loud and clear in my ears many times...beautifully written PB :)

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    1. It's a horrible feeling, isn't it? I hate it every single time! Thanks MyEra

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  3. Oh, I do hope everything will be okay too. Don't like feeling of dread myself. Take care. Your expression was nicely penned.

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    1. Welcome here Olive Tree! Thanks for the comment...that feels truly sucks, doesn't it?

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  4. Oh, would that dread were such a fleeting thing for everyone...Some suffer from it all day, every day.

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    1. Welcome here Ron! I can't even begin to imagine what it must be like to have that feeling every day, all day! It's bad enough when it occurs occasionally and lasts a day or two!

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  5. hmm I wanted to write something but did not find words to write .. that moment was gone :)

    nice one

    Bikram's

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  6. Felt so familiar! A little bit scary actually..

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    1. Welcome here The Ugly Caterpillar! It is a bit scary that most of us go through this, huh?

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  7. very evocative. would have been even better to have a picture of the same ocean and the same sky in a better moment. things change significantly, irrespective of what we may do/ not do. and there surely are times when the change is for the better- not necessarily because of our efforts, but in spite of them!!

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    1. Welcome here Raggedglory....you make a good point! It would have been great to have another pic. And I agree...things sometimes just change even without us doing anything...

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